Why is the scenario of Alita Angel Warrior not attractive?
Alita Battle Angel is doing a lot of cinemas around the world because of visual effects, but the content is not rated well. Join Nextphim to find out why the script Alita Angel Warrior is not attractive?
Who is Alita? The origin of the Japanese Cyberpunk manga symbol
OBJECTIVES OF ACTION OF AN EXPRESS CHARACTER
From the very beginning, at the stage of character creation and setting, we learn that Alita was found in the landfill by Professor Ido, Alita wakes up in a robot body of Ido's daughter. Alita doesn't know who she is, so what she wants is to find her past.
But after Alita went out, she saw MotorBall on the screen, next saved the dog and met Hugo, he introduced Hunter Zapan's name to pass by.
Alita saw a flash of memory memory through a fight with the Grewishka and the others.
Come here, we know more Alita has the ability to fight evil ...
Questions to ask:
- What will Alita do next to rediscover the past?
- Who is Alita capable of fighting?
- What was her mission in the past?
But then, Alita's goal is changed according to Hugo's dream of going to Shalem.
That was Hugo's goal, not Alita's in the first place?
From that goal, Alita rushed into the game of Motorball when she learned that the winner would receive a large sum of money, which is how Hugo helped Shalem go.
Even later, Alita also took his heart to give Hugo to sell for money.
So, the goal of finding Alita herself from the beginning had faded.
A few more flashbacks of the past, we see Alita and a group of unknown warriors fighting on their way to Shalem. It's not clear why they climbed there. What they want? Then all the dead.
Who is Alita? The origin of the Japanese Cyberpunk manga symbol
OBJECTIVES OF ACTION OF AN EXPRESS CHARACTER
From the very beginning, at the stage of character creation and setting, we learn that Alita was found in the landfill by Professor Ido, Alita wakes up in a robot body of Ido's daughter. Alita doesn't know who she is, so what she wants is to find her past.
But after Alita went out, she saw MotorBall on the screen, next saved the dog and met Hugo, he introduced Hunter Zapan's name to pass by.
Alita saw a flash of memory memory through a fight with the Grewishka and the others.
Come here, we know more Alita has the ability to fight evil ...
Questions to ask:
- What will Alita do next to rediscover the past?
- Who is Alita capable of fighting?
- What was her mission in the past?
But then, Alita's goal is changed according to Hugo's dream of going to Shalem.
That was Hugo's goal, not Alita's in the first place?
From that goal, Alita rushed into the game of Motorball when she learned that the winner would receive a large sum of money, which is how Hugo helped Shalem go.
Even later, Alita also took his heart to give Hugo to sell for money.
So, the goal of finding Alita herself from the beginning had faded.
A few more flashbacks of the past, we see Alita and a group of unknown warriors fighting on their way to Shalem. It's not clear why they climbed there. What they want? Then all the dead.
THE ENGINE OF THE CLEAR EVILER
The villain here is the last boss of Nova, in the past, what did he do to get all the warriors to climb to Shalem to handle him?
Why did he stop people from going to Shalem?
Why did all the warriors die and how did Vego let Alita or Alita escape? Do not know too.
INHERITED CHARACTERS
Excess characters here a lot:
The most typical is the Black Assistant, who does nothing but assist Professor Ido to transplant Alita's body at the beginning, then to no avail.
TRANSFORMATION OF MIND CHARGE TOO QUICK
This is a problem for Chiren's character.
What changed her mind to save Hugo? Before that, she had no interaction with Alita or any factor that awakened her conscience to make a 180 degree turn. It is not enough to persuade just one dialog.
WHY IS TITANIC?
This is an example for you to compare the two scenarios with the same author James Cameron.
The protagonist's main character, Rose, is very clear and goes through the whole movie.
The villain here is the last boss of Nova, in the past, what did he do to get all the warriors to climb to Shalem to handle him?
Why did he stop people from going to Shalem?
Why did all the warriors die and how did Vego let Alita or Alita escape? Do not know too.
INHERITED CHARACTERS
Excess characters here a lot:
The most typical is the Black Assistant, who does nothing but assist Professor Ido to transplant Alita's body at the beginning, then to no avail.
TRANSFORMATION OF MIND CHARGE TOO QUICK
This is a problem for Chiren's character.
What changed her mind to save Hugo? Before that, she had no interaction with Alita or any factor that awakened her conscience to make a 180 degree turn. It is not enough to persuade just one dialog.
WHY IS TITANIC?
This is an example for you to compare the two scenarios with the same author James Cameron.
The protagonist's main character, Rose, is very clear and goes through the whole movie.
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Rose wanted to escape marriage with her fiancé because she did not love him, she accepted it because the family situation was exhausted.
Rose commits suicide by jumping off the ship, and is rescued by Jack. Later, Rose loved Jack because she found true love until the end of Rose's life still loved Jack.
Conclude:
The most important thing in a scenario needs to be clear and transparent:
- What does the character want? WANT
- What will the character do to achieve the goal? DO
- What prevents the character from reaching the goal? TROUBLE.
Rose commits suicide by jumping off the ship, and is rescued by Jack. Later, Rose loved Jack because she found true love until the end of Rose's life still loved Jack.
Conclude:
The most important thing in a scenario needs to be clear and transparent:
- What does the character want? WANT
- What will the character do to achieve the goal? DO
- What prevents the character from reaching the goal? TROUBLE.